This is my review after more than a year of writing this book. I will start by saying that this is not my best work, but one that is very fun to write, and from the comments I receive, it is quite fun to read as well. This is not an action-packed story with very high tension and suspense, so don’t expect that. It is more than anything a Slice of life. This is a story about a man who turned into energy and can no longer die. As a result, he goes around the world, the galaxies, and eventually the multiverse to see new things and visit new places. You will see all types of power systems, all types of stories, not just Eastern Fantasy as I idiotically put it up as. There’s cultivation, magic, summoning, space adventure, and will be many more things. In addition, I wish to answer a few questions and clear some confusion/ hatred. Q. Why did you turn him into a Human? That beats the premise of the story being about a Non-human MC. A. I didn’t turn him into a human, he was always meant to be one. I never intended to write a non-human MC to begin with when the idea first popped into my head. Still, in a sense, he’s still not a human and never will be. ****** Q. Why is the MC dumb/ not intelligent? A. When I started, I didn’t even know how to write a mediocre MC, let alone one with a brain. So I decided to go with an easy choice that will let me do some exposition without making it an info dump. So, basically, it was because I wasn’t very good at writing in general. ***** Q. Why are the first 100 or so chapters bad? A. When I started writing the book, I had 0 hope of continuing it. I was already writing another book I had started just a month ago, so I didn’t pay much attention to it. I gave this book maybe an hour at most to simply write a chapter and no other time to think of the plot. As a result, the first 100 chapters are some of the worst chapters I have ever written. I only started caring because it ended up being quite a bit popular amongst the readers. ***** Q. Why does the MC not jump in a volcano and sleep for a million years? A. I get this question a lot, even though it is explained. He cannot just sleep forever. There is a high chance of losing energy instead of gaining it when he sleeps. Besides, he likes meeting new people and seeing the world. ****** Q. Why does the MC care about humans? A. Why not? He was a human too, and in some way, he still is one. If you are looking for a cold MC, or anti-hero MC, this is not it. Just because he’s an immortal, he isn’t immediately apathetic to everything around him. ***** I hope you can read past the first 100 chapters, and maybe even enjoy them. If you cannot, that’s understandable as well. Thank you for reading the book either way.
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I didn't even find him, having love feelings in the first 250 chapters and am totally feeling VOID now and angery (I don't know why, maybe i read 250 chapters in 2 day without any pause or just because finding out MC both Love candidates weren't the candidate to begin with and 3rd one is cold Mikaela who won't be either for sure, you might have already killed her).
There are characters he will be around for an arc or two, but it's mostly a story where the MC will have to leave them behind to go on with his journey.
Zelga:I read the first 100 chaptets and am uncertain, wether to continue. The one thing that realy bothers me is the lack of characters so far. Will it always be just mc and some generic replacable sidecharacters or will there be an actual group that stays together for at least a few hundred chapters?
HandsomeWeeb:When will Ning unlock kinetic energy?
"I will start by saying that this is not my best work"- snoring panda, being wrong. in all honesty though, i love this book so much, its funny, easy to follow, has amazing world building, great and memorable characters (yes even the ones from the very begining) and i really enjoy the little stories of people ning leaves behind which you've started giving in the last few arcs.