Review Detail of Sir_Yabas_III in A Reincarnated Tale : Pokémon

Full points for writing quality. The writing quality is one if the things that makes me actually continue reading the story. No points for story development. It sometime feels like whole chapters are filler. You could give a 500 word summary of the story and include everything of importance, because nothing has happend yet. It started out good, but by the time the summer camp thing got introduced it was cheaper after chapter of charachter introductions about charachter we already know. We're here for MC's Pokemon journey, develop him before you waste so much time on tertiary characters. 4 out of 5 stars for charachter design. MC personality is basic, there is nothing that stands out except his grooming thing, but reincarnation/isekai/self inserts are always a little weird when it comes to pairings. So I'm keeping one eye closed as long as it doesnt go too far. MC has a standard appearance, which is a plus when 90% of the other self inserts out there are edgy. The MC starts out saying how he doesnt want unfair advantages, so I went in with a whole different mindset than what I got. Pretty much every adult in his life is Champion class, the egg he gets hatches in an overpowered Pokemon from day one. A legendary gives him his own special Z-move. This is where the point loss comes from, the more unfair advantages he gets the more I find myself rooting against him. Full points for updating stability. 3 point for world background, we got a lot of background but it suffers from show dont tell. Author is too busy telling us everything about the world to start the journey and actually have us encounter it.