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I like the story (I have read 130+ chapters) but there are two things that I don’t like and those are the long and unnecessary descriptions and the grammar. But at least the grammer is nothing major (at least the author does not confuse he and her pronouns). If minor grammar mistakes and long descriptions don’t bother you then you should give the story a try.

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The Tales Of Divine Sun Dragon

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thanks for reading:) For the character description problem, I already start changing it in chapter 150 or something.