Please fix the grammar it makes it hard to read other than that I enjoy the story a lot keep up the good work and I hope you continue to update
Eclipse_Moon25
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LIKEEclipse_Moon25:the grammar will progressively getting better as I continue posting chapters. So I hope you can be patient:)
Maskofgluttony:I know I’m on chapter 53 rn and the grammar is way better I hope it continues to get better 😁