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Snollygoster
SnollygosterAuthor2yrSnollygoster

AFTER 140 CHAPTERS! (MUST READ) Everyone mentions positive points, but I'll mention the negatives ones, since I know them well, and have worked hard to vanish them from my future later writings. -Some chapters are small in beginning. But all chapters are of a big length after a threshold. -Also, the mistakes you see in the English are mostly typos, and they're non existent in the future chapters after I started using Grammerly keyboard in later chapters. -The first year does not have much deviation from the Canon. But the plot and pacing improve more and more as the story progresses. He only gets a familiar later in the first year, he only duels a teacher in the second year, he only participates in the international dueling competition in his third year. And there's more. I don't want to spoil it. Thus, don't just quit in the beginning chapters and keep reading, the book will improve itself in all aspects. - Romance: The romance might seem a bit off in the beginning since it would seem that mc is using tricks and lies to the love interest, but that's NOT the case. He'll realize that he doesn't like tricks after his first few tries, and he'll be honest after he can fully trust her and when her mental defense is strong enough to keep his secrets. -Humor: It's something that'll always stay controversial. Every person has a different sense of humor. Some will absolutely love it, some will cringe (Even I cringe at some of the things I've written in the past). But, the cringy stuff is non-existent in the future chapters, since the story becomes serious as the plot progresses, so no need to worry.

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HP: I Have "Pure" Magic

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Chris2121
Chris2121Lv1Chris2121

will you add fleur to his love interest??

ShadowClono5
ShadowClono5Lv14ShadowClono5

Can you add luna lovegood please

Snollygoster
SnollygosterAuthorSnollygoster

Oh, and I forgot to mention, the beginning phase, i.e. pre-hogwarts might have a few plot holes—if you really are the digging type— but! they're so insignificant and are would be cleared in the later chapters where this lowly author's writing improves. There wouldn't have been any plot holes if the author and the readers weren't so eager for the main plot (The Hogwarts first year) to start.

Gerson_play
Gerson_playLv2Gerson_play

very good story, do not abandon it. although the chapters are a bit short

Snollygoster
SnollygosterAuthorSnollygoster

there's no fixed length till 85 some are even 800-1000 words, but after that, all are within 2000-3000, which is considered quite long on this site, how far how you read?

Gerson_play:very good story, do not abandon it. although the chapters are a bit short
machadogbc
machadogbcLv15machadogbc

Who is the love interest?

MAIDENLESS
MAIDENLESSLv1MAIDENLESS

Is this a multiverse story?

Snollygoster:there's no fixed length till 85 some are even 800-1000 words, but after that, all are within 2000-3000, which is considered quite long on this site, how far how you read?
Snollygoster
SnollygosterAuthorSnollygoster

No, not yet anyway.

MAIDENLESS:Is this a multiverse story?