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Review Detail of BlackSnowAngel in GUARDIAN OF HEAVENHELL

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BlackSnowAngel
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So far there are only a few chapters so the possibilities of this story is endless. Its an interesting start and the character are interesting. There are a few pacing problems and the the where to place the words but it seems this is the authors fist try of writing a series. SO, with that being said, dont give up and keep writing.

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GUARDIAN OF HEAVENHELL

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BlackSnowAngel
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and the placement of said.*

itsuki_kun1195
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u r right its my first try!