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Aristocrat to Adventurer is a charming fantasy Isekai with funny and often times clever characters. The world the author has imagined works adequately as the backdrop for the more intimate story he’s telling. The pacing is just right for the purpose of instilling attachment from the reader to the characters while the story builds in the background the tools for greater story progression and world-building. The writing is easy to read, but encumbered by baffling writing choices. If the author were to address the concerns I’ve raised in the writing section of this review, he could really create something a cut above many of the Webnovels I’ve come across in my idle reading. This is an excerpt. You can find the full review on my wordpress blog: clonereviews. There's a link on my profile.

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Aristocrat to Adventurer

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Thank you very much for the review. I will be reworking my story, keeping your assessment of it in mind! Thank you again!