The concept has a lot of potential. The writing style is way too chaotic. There is a lot of open threads that will possibly resolved in a satisfying way but the problem is there's too many of these threads at the same time. There's just too much setup why foreshadow multiple events so early on it's too much to digest. I guess this is just my preference and others may not be bothered by the above... probably worth picking up again later but for now it's a pause/ drop
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