pretty good job overall mc can be a bit clunky like his choices are just designed to make it fit with the central theme/ plot also some chapters are a bit of a slow build up, so pacing might not be up to everyones taste.

The translation is a bit crap but it's not so bad that it gets in the way. Story is fairly predictable.... with the foreshadowing you can quite easily anticipate much of what's going to happen. If ur into a bog standard cultivation type novel this one is decent. It's basically average -- which compared to whats out there makes it worth reading for me atleast.

The concept has a lot of potential. The writing style is way too chaotic. There is a lot of open threads that will possibly resolved in a satisfying way but the problem is there's too many of these threads at the same time. There's just too much setup why foreshadow multiple events so early on it's too much to digest. I guess this is just my preference and others may not be bothered by the above... probably worth picking up again later but for now it's a pause/ drop