Review Detail of DaoistazVFGr in Sage's Cultivation: Mage in Cultivation World

I understand what you are saying, it is my fault as well as an author. But, yeah, I am retouching those chapters from 1-200 for the reasons you've written. Those confusing things were to be explained in future chapters as they've got to have something to connect with. The pace was slightly slow that might have been fillers for you, I've even shown the creator and higher beings as well as from a different world in a vague manner. Those mentioned were not to confuse readers, but to give an idea of what to expect in the book as I didn't want to make it a generic cultivation novel. In the current chapters, things were slightly explained about how things were connected. However, I want to thank you for reading this work of mine.

Hi. Spoilers are not the thing which one should use to make connections with future events or show readers what to expect from the novel. It's like at the start of a detective story write who are the murder. And fillers is things which have no influence on a plot, not the "slow pace" of a story development. Better to let readers explore secrets of the world together with main character than expose them right away. And again - personality disorder as main plot hook? Why?

I see why it is problematic not to leave some foreshadowing, which is what I am still dealing with. What you mentioned about personality disorder as the main plot hook wasn't actually the hook. Which is why, I admit that I made flaws in my novel, and I am learning bit by bit from them. Readers might get confused, which I am guilty of. I don't mean to leave any spoilers, but the personality trope shows about the MC's problems and background. More specifically, how he became powerful in his previous world. And that was necessary to establish the MC's character in the later chapters, focusing on cultivation (martial arts and mystical arts) solely. I also meant to create the world and believable side characters with their own story in the same novel, which is not a good approach I guess since it is a "filler". But filler is common, people even call flashbacks as filler if they were unnecessary. But literally, fillers were just breakers. Would you read a novel with just all the actions? Won't it make the scenes repetitive? So yeah, that's why I am retouching the chapters since they reek of my amateurness.