Review Detail of JohnDoer in Evolution to GOD

Well, it is an interesting novel. Writing is simple and easy to read. I like the humour. But, i would prefer to add more descriptive sentences too - some chapters are like full dialogues, without anything else, even something like he said, it said, which sometimes confuses. It makes the reading easier, but poorer, thin. Overall, it's a good read, with a potential. Good job! Keep it up!