Review Detail of TheAmbrosius in Eternal Thief
Review detail
WRITING QUALITY: -This category for Orginal Authors can especially can fluctuate between god awful and on par with long-time established authors like "Cocooned Cow" who wrote True Martial World and "Jing Wu Hen" who wrote Ancient Godly Monarch. This particular author has done in my opinion a reasonable job in providing quality writing to us readers. I don't find myself looking back to understand what I read be it from poor grammar or structure. So I give it a 5. STABILITY OF UPDATES: -This category I'm not sure about. I find looking at the weekly chapters update with it being at least once a day. So I give it a 5. STORY DEVELOPMENT: -What is proper SD? To put it simply it's the expansion of the world the characters live in through a linear plot. Some flashbacks here and there but overall going from Point A to B. For Fantasy especially Eastern it's necessary to show where the MC is, in contrast, the different realms he may explore. The plot if done right develops well-rounded characters, introduces background into the world, and takes you on a journey to ends known only to the author. -This story has gripped me so far. The separating and reuniting of loved ones. The schemes of the various enemies vying to get what the MC has. With each new plot development like his sister leaving, his wife being sealed, etc expand the story's reach. I want to see over that next hill on the horizon thanks to the quality development. CHARACTER DESIGN: -What is CD? A Common Example for these types of books is when the MC is forced to face the reality of needing to kill. This transition into a cultivator is an intricate part of designing a character. -I find this character development to be fascinating. Going from a simple boy who wanted to take care of his little sister, faced with the ugliness of the cultivation world, and given an opportunity to protect himself and those closest to him through... Steeling? At face value, the MC leans towards being a lighter side, however his powets are dark in nature. That's what makes this MC unique. A compassionate man who learns to be ruthless using the power of darkness to steal from those who had it coming. Anyone whos read or watched Robin Hood gets a similar vibe. While he dosent consider himself a hero or saint his actions towards those who bear no ill will are of benavolence which I especially like. -It looks to me like this 1st Mortal Heaven is for laying a solid foundation not only in cultivation but also in cultivating his Theifs character. -The people so far be lovers, friends, or enemies have all served a pivotal role in helping the MC develop to where he and will be. I would rate this higher than 5 but I can't so 5 will do. -Specifaclly his enemies have shown to aid in the MCs development while the women have kept his warmth alive. I look forward to how him and the lil sis will develop, however considering the distance its going to be a while which I'm fine with. WORLD BACKGROUND: -So far the 1st Mortal Heaven has been unfolding at a reasonable pace. We dont need to know too much about the other contitents so keeping that a mystery is good. While the low land and the many higher lands are becoming cleaer as the MC cultivates. As long as the mystery and reveal are done tastefully I look forward to the greater world ahead. Overall: 5/5.
Eternal Thief
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No ntr. Relationshipâs leads towards being healthy after going through difficult times. No yandera.
CHAOS_FOOLISH: HEllo! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know if yanderes, and if the protagonist really likes girls, doesn't just use... please answer me
Yes. Its done quite well so far. 1 locked in, 1 in the horizon. Both set the bar high for new members so you dont have to worry about constant new members being added. Hope that helps!
Immortal_Panda:Is there a harem in this story?
TheAmbrosius:Yes. Its done quite well so far. 1 locked in, 1 in the horizon. Both set the bar high for new members so you dont have to worry about constant new members being added. Hope that helps!
Have no fear there is! The MC is made aware of the greater forces that he canât compete against yet despite his system. Plus he repeatedly underestimates how significant his lack of knowledge, power, and system is until heâs confronted with enemies time and time again that take advantage of him so he must learn
Jheydi327:Is there a character development for MC? ?. . I think he's plain stupid just because he easily steal from Billy shop. .. He just acts stupid like he thinks that He can Steal everything? ??. ..
TheAmbrosius:Have no fear there is! The MC is made aware of the greater forces that he canât compete against yet despite his system. Plus he repeatedly underestimates how significant his lack of knowledge, power, and system is until heâs confronted with enemies time and time again that take advantage of him so he must learn
Its hard to say if your theory is true or not. Hes only at the beginning of his journey plus with the idea of multiple heavens shows how far this novel can be taken. So Its up to you if that revelation that might happen is worth stopping the novel. For me i have multiple novels im reading so if this one takes a turn i dont like i can appreciate the joy ive come across so far.
Jheydi327:I began to feel suspicious about this Dark Void thing and the System... And I hope this won't bring dissapointment and ruined the Novel.. It's good so far but if this nemesis of his was the one controlling his is system.. I'm DROPPING
What About the status of Harem?? .. Any new members or Candidates?? .. I'm at chaps 160+ but there's no ups. .I Thought Nola will be added but Its dissapointing.đ But I still read cause it's enjoyable
TheAmbrosius:Its hard to say if your theory is true or not. Hes only at the beginning of his journey plus with the idea of multiple heavens shows how far this novel can be taken. So Its up to you if that revelation that might happen is worth stopping the novel. For me i have multiple novels im reading so if this one takes a turn i dont like i can appreciate the joy ive come across so far.
From what i can tell the author has set a high standard for new members considering whos already joined. The devil women evolving and the Hunter race girl from the beginning. Anyone else needs to be high level like them which hasent happened yet. I would focus more on enjoying his thieving for now so harem expectations dont ruin the novel this early.
Jheydi327:What About the status of Harem?? .. Any new members or Candidates?? .. I'm at chaps 160+ but there's no ups. .I Thought Nola will be added but Its dissapointing.đ But I still read cause it's enjoyable
I agree with both. The second one is unfortunate but within reason since things happen. I dont think having a hard world development is bad thing by itself. If the author keeps it that way for too long and doesnât keep me intrigued I tend to not like hard development anymore. Thats my opinion anyways.
Shadow_1854:this novel is one of the best except 1) structure of world is hard to understand. 2) chapter release is not regular
Go ahead. From my perspective you werenât serious in giving my review a sincere read if thatâs all it takes for you to stop.
Mazino:i started reading this review and then i see ancient godly monarch associated with "good" so i just stopped there. have a nice day.
I don't think this will happen because why would heaven cut off any method of getting strength on equal footing with him/her/it, destroy overpowered treasures, and constantly oppress those rising against it, and then make a system that's sole existence is to steal from it. Tbh, this is kind of an unfounded worry
Jheydi327:I began to feel suspicious about this Dark Void thing and the System... And I hope this won't bring dissapointment and ruined the Novel.. It's good so far but if this nemesis of his was the one controlling his is system.. I'm DROPPING
HEllo! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know if yanderes, and if the protagonist really likes girls, doesn't just use... please answer me
TheAmbrosius:Yes. Its done quite well so far. 1 locked in, 1 in the horizon. Both set the bar high for new members so you dont have to worry about constant new members being added. Hope that helps!