Review Detail of MrScroll in Asgard's god of nature

For your first story this is not that bad, we can see that your improving with each chapter the only thing that I would say need major improvement is your character designs you need to give them more interactions with your mc like thor for example could have been done better more integrations with the mc like when he fought odin and showed his "True" power I thought there would be a chapter where to see how thor would react instead you rushed passed it with a time skip. (But any way the stroy is great start so you get a 4 stars from me :D)