Review Detail of Roktah in Reincarnated In Merlin

grammar is seriously bad. what wh know are the mcs wishes, he then gets reincarnated and an immediete 18 year time skip happens without warning, all that we know is that he got instant mastery in the time and learned some skills. no character development, nothing. world background, doesn't exist unless you know the source material. you just get thrown into the story. this story needs improvment in every apect.