Review Detail of yohananmikhael in Revenge of the half-demon cultivator on his second life.

i guess it's time for me to leave a review! i'm not really strict into reviewing. also i have a suggestion for you my friend. start making an ingredient for a sentence. here's one. "thoughts/feelings, action, conclusion" example being applied, "Hoping to have the tea, he slightly moved his body to her, making her notice that he was into the tea." like that. i just feel like it makes the reading experience better. i just noticed that there are some short sentences, and i want to point out that. that's all! and now for the review... i feel like i have to binge read this right now. PROCRASTINATING!!! gosh, i have stock piles of ideas to write but it can wait, the deadline is still far.