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Review Detail of AzothTreaty in Dimensional Descent

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AzothTreaty
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Had such great ideas of dimensions and rankings and stuff. Basically a system apocalypse version of The Ultimate Evolution and uses historical events instead of movies. Really really great concept. However the mc is so overpowered personality wise that i find it hard to sympathize with him. MC is a super athlete who has mysterious inheritance giving parents like the MC from the Mech Touch. MC is practically a golden boy that has everything in life given to him. Story-wise, i only got till like chapter 20~ since the mayan temple arc was basically breezed through. MC has a futuristic bike and uses it in a mayan temple. Idk about mayan temples but the description of corridors doesnt necessarily depict a good place to use a bike. A good MC is one who has to struggle, who has to persevere. Cringe MCs are those who get handed way too much goodies or who gets shit on way too much and cannot fight back. This is definitely a silver spoon fed MC. Can someone get this concept and create a better novel? Such a shame to let such a promising concept die

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