2 edits and this is still here? Seriousoy?

Second edit and still has grammar errors, seriously? “My second wish is to knowledge?”

Not to mention all this loot update is the author getting hundreds of free words added to his book. Its like he is reaching for a million word book

Havent read it yet but from reading the reviews, it seems author is a people pleasing simpleton with no spine nor vision. Writing is you giving your vision and story to the world. If you are going to write to get praises from your readers, then i would suggest just make some tiktoks and dont pollute this space with your weak-willed dao.

Wow what a great combo. His dishes plus his luck can possibly supercharge his stats

Stereotypical world building with bland characters

This is not a story. This is a wish fulfillment report of someone who played an MMO and lost so bad that they wrote a report where everything is going well for them. MC is bland af. Meant to only be a blank slate for readers to slot themselves in Everything is reported intellectually monotonous. Even if there are ”human reactions” from the chats, it seems lifeless. Good world building so far though. Chapter 33 and i havent noticed any preset rules being violated yet.

You just said that you will use your advantages to keep being on top but then u assume that his lead is a temporary one? Is this a character issue or an author issue?

He should have taught his people the sand stealth skill so they dont come back bruised.

Here’s hoping this doesnt devolve into the fascist racist dump that is The World Online

Bro didnt learn anything abroad

At least he isnt a drooling idiot yet

Treating is a novel version of playing one of those mmo mobile games where you click some stuff and conquer some stuff without needing any skill.

What is the purpose of being a transmigrator from earth if you will only be transmigrated to an earth which is presumably undergoing a system apocalyptic event?

Amazing story but with harem. MC is sufficiently challenger and responds amazingly well to all the challenges presented to him. The only thing preventing me from finishing this book is the cringe transition to a harem lord. MC was sufficiently challenged early in his life to strive for a better life. However at some point he turned to become a hormone filled idiot with the only motivation being “ape protect mate” “y u touch my ape mate?”.

Had such great ideas of dimensions and rankings and stuff. Basically a system apocalypse version of The Ultimate Evolution and uses historical events instead of movies. Really really great concept. However the mc is so overpowered personality wise that i find it hard to sympathize with him. MC is a super athlete who has mysterious inheritance giving parents like the MC from the Mech Touch. MC is practically a golden boy that has everything in life given to him. Story-wise, i only got till like chapter 20~ since the mayan temple arc was basically breezed through. MC has a futuristic bike and uses it in a mayan temple. Idk about mayan temples but the description of corridors doesnt necessarily depict a good place to use a bike. A good MC is one who has to struggle, who has to persevere. Cringe MCs are those who get handed way too much goodies or who gets shit on way too much and cannot fight back. This is definitely a silver spoon fed MC. Can someone get this concept and create a better novel? Such a shame to let such a promising concept die

Just another trash cultivation novel. I have read only till chapter 2 and the cultivation tropes and lazy writing is super prevalent that i cannot continue reading else i will lose more brain cells. The Harem tag definitely doesnt help its case

Writing feels ok but also not? The trope seems to be well done. MC gets a weird system and now is in a cat and mouse game of trying to hide it from every bigshot there is. However the side characters feel too weird. Layla is a weirdo stalker who wants to be a vampire and so latches onto Quinn. Vorden is a weirdo with multiple personalities and one of those is weirdly attracted to Quinn in a possessive, pseudo-gay way. Erin is your classic ice queen trope. Logan was just introduced and he is a lvl 8 user who is trying to figure out who blood evolver is. Whut? Why would this ultra elite who can create a system in a virtual game focus on one lone possible hacker? Is his whole life dedicated to that single game that any threat to is something he takes very seriously? Their world is one that is rampant with corruption and nepotism. No amount of personal power or strength will allow a world so steeped in corruption to still stand. Good abilities and slightly interesting concept but the world background, side characters, and overall laziness of the plot makes it feel like a novel thought of by government employee in Sichuan who was passed over in promotion by the mayor’s son in law and is trying to compensate by crafting this wissh fulfillment OC.

For sure this is what Gloriana will need to do in order to advance to Senior