Writing review as of chapter 462. Decent novel better than the majority in this app but plagued with pacing issues. Story premise is interesting with higher dimensions and historical rifts. However, dimensions basically just become power levels and not much variety with rifts(would explain but don’t want to give spoilers). Author sets up for large character development by making the MC infuriatingly naive. Love story just feels forced so isn’t impactful but more like filler. Pacing becomes an issue with explanations taking majority of a chapter often with rhetorical questions that could be answered within actual story elements allowing reader to make conclusions instead of treating them like children who need everything explained. Action is good and character development is well done but as stated before character starts almost drop worthy. Will continue to read
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LIKE--Currently all caught up-- He's freaking alpha and so satisfyingly op :)) of course it's relative to his age group but still feels incredible hehe
SiR_Maina:Does the mc stay the weak beta the whole time? I just ask bc that isn't my taste. I'm all for an underdog, weak to strong story but I don't like a weak mc that struggles to survive on plot armor or "lucky" encounters
Joshua_Park_4552:--Currently all caught up-- He's freaking alpha and so satisfyingly op :)) of course it's relative to his age group but still feels incredible hehe
SiR_Maina:Does the mc stay the weak beta the whole time? I just ask bc that isn't my taste. I'm all for an underdog, weak to strong story but I don't like a weak mc that struggles to survive on plot armor or "lucky" encounters