I have and stand by my comment, this novel is straight garbage

This chapter doesn’t make much sense with the fact Lith is Derek. They aren’t separate people in one body. I get fighting the chaos of his abomination side and his rage but it’s directly saying Derek as if Lith isn’t Derek

It’s getting annoying she doesn’t see the difference

Yea I get it’s supposed to be a super traumatic event for Solus but it’s literally not the same person. like hating someone’s twin cause they look identical

Maybe author meant second that

For small characters it’s helpful when they haven’t been mentioned in a while but this was just a few chapters ago and author does this for even main characters. It’s obvious filler

I hope Lith breaks Night’s core right in front of Baba Yaga

Unless the prisoners were blinded the whole time they would still see the guards walking and know what’s normal. Also sense of balance is natural not to mention pooling of blood around the brain due to gravity

It’s called filler, so they can add more chapters without progressing the story

Oh how convenient that everything is always at about the same stage as MC

Making the same mistake twice flag

You’re right I meant a rectus or oblique

A whole chapter that basically just says force crafters are rare. There is so much filler in this novel it’s becoming a joke

I’m gonna tear an occipital muscle rolling my eyes so fuc*ing hard at this novel

The premise is pretty unique but other than that it is actually pretty average. And more like reading it because supreme magus was on hiatus and I’ve caught up on cradle, warformed, and dragon heart

I mean sure author could be saving something for higher dimensions that makes them unique but in this context it’s just a power level that supposedly can’t be jumped

Says dimensions aren’t power levels, literally goes on to describe power levels and body refinement used in just about every other cultivation novel

This has been mentioned several times in other chapters. It’s literally just filler at this point

So they can sense the empire’s army coming but completely miss white city just because they are having a conversation? Even with the excuse of being focused they have no scouts monitoring for other attacks? Either they are really stupid or just straight up plot hole

Writing review as of chapter 462. Decent novel better than the majority in this app but plagued with pacing issues. Story premise is interesting with higher dimensions and historical rifts. However, dimensions basically just become power levels and not much variety with rifts(would explain but don’t want to give spoilers). Author sets up for large character development by making the MC infuriatingly naive. Love story just feels forced so isn’t impactful but more like filler. Pacing becomes an issue with explanations taking majority of a chapter often with rhetorical questions that could be answered within actual story elements allowing reader to make conclusions instead of treating them like children who need everything explained. Action is good and character development is well done but as stated before character starts almost drop worthy. Will continue to read