I must say the concept was unique ans the Synopsis was interesting enough for me. Though I am an action type reader, I must say yours was nice. Though I advice to choose present tense as I have observed and there are past mixed in it. Well editors will just trim them if you have one đ Good luck and good job!
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LIKEEzckapel:Thank you so much! Yeah, I'm currently working on those right now. I'm currently editing them.image