This is a well-written story! After I read chapter 1, I'm hooked! So I continue reading until chapter 5. Again, I am captivated by the character development and the author's well-written scenarios of what's going on. This might be the second MMRPG genre novel I have read so far, and it's good! I will not get bored waiting for updates since it has 90+ chapters already. Kudos to you! I love it.

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Thank you, this might be a slow update since I'll be only posting chapters on Monday and Friday. Also, I'm a contract writer at another platform, so stability updates are somewhat meh. Thanks for the reviews! If I can, I will post the next chapter tomorrow. LOL

It's pretty interesting, and I'm getting hook every dialog I read. I'm into this kind of story. I'm going to read further to check the character development and how to story flows. The story is well written, and I love the synopsis.

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Good plot, I enjoy reading the story. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] The story has a unique world and a fascinating plot. However, I can't say yet if the character is strong enough with its development. I will continue reading this.

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I really loved the first-person perspective. Since that is how I also write. The characters and the story development are so far good. Looking forward to seeing how the story goes. I would recommend this! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Thank you so much, I'm still a novice, so I keep doing my best. I posted 32 chapters already, but I remove them for ongoing revision.

thank you so much. I love Emily in Paris as well!

[img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] I love how the narration is decent. The details on how you wrote the world are admirable. As far as the chapters go, I read it until chapter 5 before I review every passing scene; it keeps on getting interesting. It has a unique plot and interesting character development. Kudos to you; I hope you won't drop this.

[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] You described her story very well! You definitely have a unique way of writing, I can relate to her somehow, and I wish that her future character development grows! Givin' this a perfect 5!

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Thank you so much! Yeah, I'm currently working on those right now. I'm currently editing them.

Yeah, I'm still working on it. By the way thanks! I'm doing that now in the new chapters then just edit it when the story is done.

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Yeah, hahaha. I'm a big fan of soul land!

Amazing character development! I love how the story goes and well explains details on what's happening. Feng Shaotian wants to live a peaceful life in a world of cultivators. Even I want to choose that dream! Dreaming for a slow life is the best! I vouch for this that it's going to be big. A twist of a slice of life can be added as a sub-genre.

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