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Kevin_Middleton
Kevin_MiddletonLv28mthKevin_Middleton

8 parts romance 2 parts story.Story started off really well, but eventually turned into a novel where MC turns out to be a flirtatious Alpha who can't keep it in his pants.MC joins the army but unlike what you'd expect, the new recruit is given an unlimited amount of freedom to do whatever he wants. It doesn't feel like the army at all and instead feels like a summer camp for teens with pent up hormones. Every new recruit in the army is thinking about hooking up with each other. There's no regulations at all.Up until the first new planet the story is pretty good. MC finds his soulmate and everything seems like as long as they can stay together everything will work out one way or another. Author does find a way to tear them apart though and what does MC do first once they're apart? Find another girl. The rebound was insanely fast. After that girl, he gets another girl, and once he drops that girl he gets another. This is all while comparing the new girls to the first one that he's still in love with. It's just a complete mess. The excuse was that he has his own urges and is really just looking for someone to satisfy them. It really doesn't help that every attractive girl he comes across instantly falls for him. I dropped around chapter 400 since it wasn't going anywhere else.

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Tyson_1102
Tyson_1102Lv14Tyson_1102

kinda happy I left this novel to stack up chapters after reading this 💀 I wondered how the author would wrap up the storyline of the other girl that was hinted at being the fml before he went to the first planet but oml, this sounds horrendous. thanks for saving me a headache.

madtitan
madtitanLv4madtitan

Its the same as his first book💀

KaraKedi
KaraKediLv1KaraKedi

thank you, I was about to read it