Review Detail of Roinuji in Chaos' Heir
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The story in the first few chapters was amazing. A traumatized character, a war against powerful aliens, strange powers and a promise of revenge. But after he meets Liiza the focus of the story completely changes. Hundreds of chapters describing the love relationship between Khan and Liiza, made me so bored. I can't read a story that ignores everything else and focuses on the romance between a human and an alien. It's sad, the action and adventure promised in the first chapters was completely in the background. The author should change the name of the story to "MY GIRLFRIEND IS AN ALIEN" It will make more sense to new readers. In short, the story is amazing, the author writes very well, but he focused on the romance. Someone like it, but I just got bored.
Chaos' Heir
Eveofchaos
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Mordimero:... and third, and fourth oh and fifth volume is already spoiled to be as well :D
Mordimero:True, true for the first half. MC still managed to get his relationship count record in 3rd volume.
It's true that the 3rd is very battle focused but he cuddles and kisses Delia 2 or 3 weeks (they spent a week in the prison so 1-2 weeks) after the break with liza and they are attracted by thier mana, unresistible, you wrote that a month after two mana connected people are a couple they become unseparable or something like that. I had alot more faith in mana but I guess a 27 yr footsoldier can break that bond in a week.
Eveofchaos:Yeah, but I wouldn't call it romance focused. Anyway, just my opinion.
Szczepan_Zawiasa:It's true that the 3rd is very battle focused but he cuddles and kisses Delia 2 or 3 weeks (they spent a week in the prison so 1-2 weeks) after the break with liza and they are attracted by thier mana, unresistible, you wrote that a month after two mana connected people are a couple they become unseparable or something like that. I had alot more faith in mana but I guess a 27 yr footsoldier can break that bond in a week.
IncrediblyInactive:So u are planning on a return to nitis and that relationship?