I enjoyed the poetry in the beginning and the poetry in Anastacia's POV in ch 3. The plot is great - i like where the story is going. It's interesting and the characters have a variety of fascinating personalities . It's got a promising storyline. Great job there! About the writing quality - I think it needs a bit of work, mainly punctuations, capitalization (when starting paragraphs/sentences) and minor grammar errors, which can be fixed easily once edited. Your poetry is very good, I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work, author!
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