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Review Detail of Dragonmach in Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

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Dragonmach
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Pretty good story so far, currently at chapter 960 and can say that in terms of quality it's one of the better ones on webnovel. Compared to the stories that are currently getting released it's 100% worth a try. Still this story is not perfect though, there are some points that could be improved or be taken into consideration as they do sometimes annoy me. I'll list my personal +/- points down below: +: English quality is great, In terms fo grammatical errors it would be hard to find any in the currently 960 chapters that are out. +: Update stability is great aswell, mostly 2 chapters a day. Sometimes it happens that the author only released 1 chapter, but they try to fix that the next day. +: The characters feel alive, even though there are some stereotype characters, their personality's feel real and throughout the story we see them developing as specific events unfold. Some of my favorite chapters are actually when they are focussing on the character developement between different characters. +: Even though it's not done perfect i can appreciate that the author is trying to hide the main plot point of the story and is revealing small amounts of information over time to make the reader guess and connect different threats. (+/- points you can see as a positive or negative point depending on personal opinion) +/-: The pace of the story is slow, depending if you like this or not but it is currently a meme that the main character is never gonna go past his current level.(Which is not the case but he hasn't gotten any level for the last 500-600 chapters) +/-: Currently it's heavely implied that the mc is gonna have a harem. Still i have to say is that even if you dislike it i would give it a try, the characters that could be part of this harem are all well developed and i have taken a liking to every single one. I can say with confidence that this is not gonna be a harem that is just adding different looking girls to add more variety. -: Far to much detail, the author has a tendency to add alot more unnecessary text when they explain something. Using like 5 to 6 lines of text for something that can be explained well in like 2 lines. -: Exaggeration, this adds abit the the previous point but the author likes to exaggerate things a ton creating countless moments were the mc and other characters are "shocked beyond words" because of some reveal while at some points i find it unnecessary. It's used at so many occasions that it can become annoying. -: Something that the author has started doing around halfway into the story is delaying the time were we find out about specific skills or stats of other items to create tension. Now if this happens once every now and then it would be fine, but this started happening with every single item or skill that was a little bit important. Some of these items/skills have already been hyped up for 10/20 chapters and the moment the reveal happens we only get a name and the author still hides the rest of the stats. It creates a great deal of frustration as the hype moment the story was building up to was ruined and the moment the stats are revealed its to late to get that hype back. -: I'm gonna add this small point after looking at other peoples reviews. I personally don't like the way of how the author reacts to negative reviews. I accept that some of these reviews are just straight up trash talking about what they don't like but others atleast try to get some points across and the reaction from the author feels very childish to me. Take it however you want but i don't see any reactions to the more negative reviews that are trying to point out thigns that the author can improve apon.

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Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

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