Review Detail of Apns444 in Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

Writing quality is superb. Reads fluently, without any gramatical errors, no issues there at all. 5/5 Stability of updates 5/5 Story development: Here comes my biggest issue with this book: pacing. It's just SO slow. At first it was nice, we had more time for development, not only of characters but of world aswell. But with time it got WAY too slow. For example: its been over 800 chapters, his partner (the succubus) is being of the sith order, her enemies, who he promised to help with, are all at least around 7th order, while he, after 800 chapters, is still FIRST order trying to tackle his quest to become second order being since chapter 340. The pacing is ABYSMAL. 2/5 Character design: one of the things i like the most about the book, the development is very great, the MC, FL and supporting characters are all fleshed out, they each have their own personalities and none are 2D. All of the characters see major or minor development, it's good. There is also plenty of decent emotional development, some supporting female leads fall in love with the MC, but he sticks with the succubus only, there is no harem and i hope it stays like that. My only issue is with the overused archetypes of characters. There have been plenty of books with cold beauties, MC adopting/taking care of ranom woman only because she had 10 years old daughter, etc. 4/5 World background: There is nothing innovative about world background in this book. It's the typical apocalypse, fall of civilization, new dimensions/worlds etc. It's what we always get. Is it bad? No. Even though it's overused, it's still very well written and quite readable. Is it a bit disappointing? Yeah, I would love to see something new. Still 3/5 Above average decent read, without innovations, but also without any major errors. Good fast food novel. Total 3.8/5. Keep it up!