Review Detail of Fahrenx in Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

MC gets cold heart, be pure logical type passive skill. SO he decideds for world domination. Do we know why? Nah just slap a lillith told us something long ago I just remembered when it suits us logic. MC also has alot of unrational temper tantrums where he just ends up killing everything, torture everyone. When you become so strong a flick of the wrist clears a beast wave, you would expect the wisdom of mature vs young ants, mindless beasts.

Succubus situation used as plot armor. We know nothing about her other than the inferred fillers that get placed to explain a way to get out of a situation and set novel direction, far too often. Why does the MC feel like he owes her anything? Nothing was explained, he just is, as she just came into exsistance and followed MC out of choice?(Clashes with logical passive trait stone heart)

We discover MC has a "turn over all scrolls and items the army finds policy or get executed family enslaved..." when an officer kills the son of the Northern camp . (they are the only ones that fight and have a chance at doing this), but when MC goes northern enemy camp (200-300 chap area) and they try to take any refugee weapons/food/equipment he dislikes it and says he has a different system?????? Because scrolls drop on lvl up from 0 to 1, feels extreemly hypocritical  to take a system given right away from humanity.  (Chinese, CCP vibes)

Biggest Mistake was having this happen on Earth. Constantly reminding reader, this is china, china, China. Now we have Heavy Chinese  Political Agenda. At this point MC is justified in china conquest because all other leaders are rapist and lowest of the low. Others back down and bend over. But invading other real countries? Throwing other real countries in the mud for Chinese supremacy to make MC look justified is a quick way to alienate the reach and fanbase. This alone will stop you from winning any awards and publicly advertise abroad (the award the beta MC male, My Vampire System won NYC Ad). Bad for the webnovel brand to push Propaganda. Needs world upgrade that changes terrain so you can never mention china or any other real nation again.

Harem but no harem. The most offputting setting in novels next to revenge novels, It's teased so much but hasn't happened yet. So about 1/4 of this novel is garbage sexual tenstion filler flirting, teasing, kinda just as bad...

Goal justification is truly bad in c335-336. Noble fear??? Global concern?? How can you put "these gun users/people are useless to me" and "do you know how many elders died? Families separated..." in the same justification. Mana "invaded" Earth and has no emotional rational so how can it aim to 'step on your head?' You introduced it as a natural event then backtrack... The world got mana same time everywhere... so all things stay roughly the same lvl/order over time relative to environment, so he could have gone looking for his family much earlier. Your rationall of he needs an army to get to his family far away won't ever make any sence. China's infrastructure is dense enough that he could make it town to town, alone or with a small team.

What a long review we had here. anyway, I'm quite curious about this book. It keeps appearing on Super gift event. But the word of succubus just only makes it a cheap trick for me and doubt its quality🤭 Now about your context, I haven't read the book yet. If all of the leaders are rapists that will drop the immersion in this book. Being a leader isn't that stup*d. On an important/sensitive topic, there must be someone who agrees, someone who rejects it, and someone neutral. It all depends on the interests. I think I'll wait for the author how he handles you🤭