Splendid synopsis, Captivating first chap, Narrations and character interactions were solid. The names of the characters are foreign-sounding for me but it was cute....haha.... Meeting such names for the first time. I think it was arabic or something similar to it? I don't know đ¤ Still, awesome job! I hope you rest well too when you write....Kudos and good luck!
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