Review Detail of Daniiiiiiiiiiiiiii in Who Said I was a Princess?

Awesome read! Even though the author isn't really updating as much, I see potential!! I like how Kari gives off this mysterious vibe. It really gets you thinking. But, I think the character designs could use a little work. The world background could also use some improvements. I was a little lost at first. Since it's still in the early stages of writing, I hope the author works hard on improving these little details.