I like your story but if you can could you put down a little bit of the mc naive it's become more crazy and I think if he fought all for one and his quirk get taken from him he will become so depressing because he is to depending to his quirk more than his physical body. Ps: I am sorry for my bad English and this is just suggestion you can ignore it too it's okay. thank you
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