Story's written fairly well and the update stability is good too. My biggest gripe with this story is how boring it is. The main character is a walking automaton that feels nothing and does nothing. He simply is. He is a sociopath that easily adjusted to a cruel world. I wouldn't of felt this to be wrong if this was any other type of novel, but knowing this is a system novel, and that the MC doesn't have to work or strive for any of his power makes it worse. He's basically a pampered child who wouldn't help anybody out of a bad situation even though through out the entire novel he has been recieving incredible help. trash.
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