Review Detail of AnkitFTW in COTE : A Man On A Mission
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let me give a review since this is my first time writing a fanfic.There will be some writing problems since English is not my first language but please bear with it.And please give any criticism you want
COTE : A Man On A Mission
AnkitFTW
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thank you for telling me .I was planning to right the synopsis after a couple chapters to write a good synopsis.Im changing it dont worry
gamabunda4873:ok criticism here then your description/summary doesn't have anything and i mean not one thing of info that would've drawn me into your story you dont even have a info chapter or anything the only thing that tells me what might happen is the title
Story is pretty good but could use some improvements. I'm no expert just giving some suggestions from novels I've read don't know if it can be incorporated in your novel tho. - Try making some space when a dialogue happens between characters maybe one line for each character - Add some character dev for side character makes it more interesting ( i think) - Should not be too op else there no struggle rivalry like deku and kacchan
yes thank you .. And I'm not planning to make my Mc really Op ..Im planning to make him more versatile..
DaoistTwiSB1:Story is pretty good but could use some improvements. I'm no expert just giving some suggestions from novels I've read don't know if it can be incorporated in your novel tho. - Try making some space when a dialogue happens between characters maybe one line for each character - Add some character dev for side character makes it more interesting ( i think) - Should not be too op else there no struggle rivalry like deku and kacchan