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Mel_AnivLv42yrMel_Aniv

REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE Now, this is amazing work from a native speaker of English! I am very happy to meet one! Such an honour! I am so happy to read it as it was a roller coaster ride of twist and turns of emotions! Amazing work! ADVICE Break your paragraphs. Make the sentences to be broken down into smaller paragraphs to lessen the burden to the eyes of readers. Just advice though, it was your call to do what you want. peace ✌️

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ReginaldDabs

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Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

From review swap dear......please also check out mine, please 🙏 😉 ❤️

2yr

ReginaldDabsAuthorReginaldDabs

Thank you for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Yeah, I noticed going back through the first couple chapters especially that the paragraphs come off way too long in the webnovel reading view. Thanks for pointing that out, I'll go back to split them up a bit more to make it look nicer!

2yr

Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

Yeah! I know it will be lighter to the eyes and easier to read. Kudos!

ReginaldDabs:Thank you for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Yeah, I noticed going back through the first couple chapters especially that the paragraphs come off way too long in the webnovel reading view. Thanks for pointing that out, I'll go back to split them up a bit more to make it look nicer!

2yr

Monarch_Of_DeathLv2Monarch_Of_Death

This is right... (Not Left)

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