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Editor and proofreader sorely needed. Reads like a second or third draft, not a finished one. Fortunately the writing is usually clear enough to mentally rewrite as I read so the riveting story doesn't get bogged down by it. The character reveals are well paced and development is clear in both the characters and the story. Lots of surprise twists mixed in with a natural progression of the plot. All in all, a story worth throwing most of my free passes at while saving my coins up to deal with cliffhangers and insatiable curiosity moments (lots of those, I admit). A story well worth many hours of my attention, and hopefully yours as well. {^θ^}

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Master Of Myths

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Many apologies for the lack of editing, I had a campaign done but apparently copy pasting from another program removes all comments so I have to redo them all over again, I hope you continue to enjoy the story and will do my best to avoid such errors in the future