Review Detail of Nullinvoid in Crossing Our Paths [BL]

REVIEW Narration: It is well thought out, but at times a bit wordy. I would cut down on a few spots. Though not tooooo much as all of it is solid stuff just a bit much to absorb early on when staring at a screen. Worldbuilding: It is solid stuff you cannot complain about it as I said above the detail in which they describe things is next level. Character development: A bit early to tell, but the character seems believable Story: A bit early, but the foundation is there for a excellent story.