Review Detail of Zabne123 in Noob Player

Read to chapter 32 and just couldn't do it anymore. The mc is getting nowhere. I understand there are troubles in his life but it feels like he doesn't have enough based off how you make the mc out to be. He is just too casual and laid back but has big dreams with too many set backs. By chapter 32 he should be somewhere especially with his fateful encounter. I feel you just made it too hard and too ridiculous for a beginning story.