See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Yes and no. The author does a good job of keeping it pretty balanced. I can go into more detail but I don't want to spoil it. If I had to say anything then I would say he is strong but literally because of it he has to face many challenges.

This is the second time this has happened.

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i seen 9 once. what was worse is that the person even pretty much copied another novel.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Thank you for the chapter. I will say tho that you need more emphasis on who is saying what. some of the conversations can be a bit confusing on who is saying what because what they are saying can be from either person.

I have to say this is a good read and worth it to spend on. The mc is hard working and willing to learn. The world background is very original. I love the power lvl system as well. Its very unique and there is so much to it but in a good way. One thing i like for the mc is the partner system. It is a good way to have someone look out for his weaknesses and always look for ways to improve. makes it so that the story is always progressing and the is a clear path for the novel as far as the general area of where it's headed

I'm sorry but this chapter was too much. I'm pretty sure the author has some issues for thinking of something like this

Thanks for the chapter and the hard work you put into these characters

Now this is where the concept of curses and boons and the effect they can have is interesting. Karma is like a currency so the more you have the better. Poor people don't mess with the rich because of fear of retaliation. You will have some who don't care but most do. This is the same concept with people with high karma such as the queen.

I am enjoying the side story since it's basically answering my questions. Thanks for the chapter

I am new to Indian culture stories but so far it has been very interesting. Thank you the extra info for names and history it has been very helpful. This was a good chapter

Hopefully with the upgraded difficulty that means a faster pace. Thanks for the chapter

Oh this barrier concept is quite interesting. I've never seen something like this done before. Thanks for the chapter I look forward to more

I appreciate the quick reply. Honestly it's too much. There are times when you have over 5 extra chapters. It's different if this is a TV show but it's not so it's not needed. I can maybe understand if you were to do it with chapters where there is vital info that spans more than one chapter. If so then keep it to 3 paragraphs max. Especially with paid chapters. You have a good book and I am enjoying it very much. I hope you take what I said into consideration.

Overall a very good read. I enjoy the witty banter between the mc and his sister. I like how they work together and they have different ways of looking at something so they help cover each other's weakness. I will say tho that addition of 2-5 paragraphs of the last chapter at the beginning of each chapter is annoying. It's completely not needed and utterly useless. Just wasted the readers time. Unless your plan is to post a new chapter once a month then maybe I can understand but if that's not the case then get rid of it. Don't we pay for the size of the chapter? So basically I'm double paying for part of each chapter and that is wrong.

Was just going to reply this lol. It really is basically the same thing. They just changed some names and few things they same but everything else is the same. Kind of sad really

This is basically the same first chapter as last week's trial read "Mistaking My Sister-n-Law For My Wife After Getting Drunk". There are a few words that are different.

Thanks for the chapter