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Review Detail of LightningCatThief in Shocking: The Daughter of the Ancient God Is My Deskmate!

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LightningCatThief
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The author isn't even trying. If you want to create a fictional universe do so, but don't copy stupid things from different cultures in this world and mesh them badly. If there was a negative world building rating, this novel would deserve it. You ask why? First, the American high school system does not work like the chinese/asien systems. The author gets everything wrong there. Second, a supposedly talentless idiot can simply enter the most prestigious school on a wim after skipping school for a year. Third, the MC relationships with the rest of the world, his background, are unrealistic, contradictory and purely there to give MC the underdog feel. Fourth, the superpowers are unimaginative, teaching them in a classroom setting is a waste of time and don't have an impact on society. Writing a fantasy novel with super powers, but taking a setting from the real world without paying attention to the consequences of super powers in the past and present is just lazy. You know, if the MC wanted to meet as many super powered individuals as possible, then handing out fliers would have been a lot easier. Becoming a talent scout, by pretending to have the superpowers to identify others talents would work much better than wathever this novel is trying and failing to do. Also MC is a crepe who preyes on others and a pedophile, it is rare for me to dislike a MC this much, but his supposedly mature ways of preying on underaged kids, while he himself is at least mentally an adult gives me hives.

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Shocking: The Daughter of the Ancient God Is My Deskmate!

Beibei Guffaw

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The way qidian is translating novels now, they take the chinese names and places etc. and they give them western names, to adapt to the readers or something, so its understandable why you would think that. If you look at the raws, you'll see everything is asian.

BooboboBoa
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There is literally no mention of America in this novel.

LightningCatThief
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Chapter 1, ca. 5 sentence. Bla Bla high school in New York City.

BooboboBoa:There is literally no mention of America in this novel.
BooboboBoa
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I stand corrected and am now on your side

LightningCatThief:Chapter 1, ca. 5 sentence. Bla Bla high school in New York City.