Review Detail of Brian_Hanes_117 in Peace offering to the cursed prince

Phenomenal story with great characters and dialogue. There are a few minor grammar mistakes here and there. I would also like to see a bit more description about how the characters look. I'd also like a bit more description about what the environment looks like. What the palace looks like. How the nobles dress. Things like that and what the weather is like. I want to feel like I'm there. But anyway, I look forward to seeing what happens next. The African story and the cultural context is intriguing.