Review Detail of BLUEelf in Inverse System

I want to continue reading hoping that future chapters will get better but I think I'm losing a lot of brain cells... The problem with your story is that the MC is mature but at the same time naive and the side characters feels like don't have a brain. They are just like actors who were following the script robotically, they feels awkward, out of place, lifeless, or whatsoever. All in all, the plot seems lifeless and don't have good interactions with each other. I think I have to write more to clarify more things so just ask if there's any questions. That's all. Hope you all the best.☺️