Review Detail of Sidney_Sinanan in Inverse System

Incredibly cringey and not worth your time, I'm sorry to say, it had a great premise but the the dialogue and actions didn't fit the characters ages at all. 6 year olds do not speak complex and intelligent sentences. Furthermore there were things like, he's got be a "man" now and save people or he had to save a girl from a fire, cliché much? (Their aunt is essentially the villain and has stolen their inheritance and assassinated their mother and probably their father, Mc has white hair, and their father was the most powerful ranger before his death and now they live in a little house in the middle of nowhere be sure they're poor). Also quite dumb plots in places, his sister got killed and he forgave the person who was at fault straight away (which confused me, because he essentially forgave him straight away with no suspicion that he might be killed by him). Do not recommend. It would be better if writing was better quality (common sense wise with dialogue and action), less clichés and better plot. On the other hand the actual punctuation, spelling etc was pretty good and there were no one sentence paragraphs (If I remember correctly) and the actual idea behind it was semi decent and actually original - impressive, I must say.