Review Detail of peacelucky in Inverse System

For story development, character design, world background, and updating stability I don't care and don't have enough information to make a judgement. However, for writing quality there is a simple theme I have noticed for all 50 chapters. This is dialogue between characters. The reason this is so critical is because this shows an author's lazyness in a way. As someone who is starting to write, for me personally, dialogue is extremely easy to write. Takes no time or effort required thinking for the story. This, however, isn't the main reason. The main reason is the beginning. Instead of the author thinking about some interesting way to put in the conflict between Rein and his related family, he just states it. It's very lazy and easy. I just feel that the author could definitely have spent more time reflecting on ways to introduce a purpose for Rein rather than have someone ramble on about it. IF you were to use the current method you use then you need to somehow explain beforehand about the person rambling on, and how it's a trait of his. But even that feels forced if done improperly. Why would you care about a bad start? Because I won't pay to read dialogue. I want a story that is thought out.