Review Detail of Brian_Hanes_117 in NPC Code: Red Riding Hood

This is a very solid story. I like how it's written and I like the description of the story for the most part. The only thing I would say is that I put a bit more into laying out how people look and how the monsters look. Besides that, I don't have any complaints. The characters are interesting, but I think the ideas make the story stand out more than anything. The idea of the virtual game is very interesting. The story development is outstanding.