Review Detail of Levoniko in NPC Code: Red Riding Hood

I'm not really into the 'inside the game' genre, but this story is charming. Thanks to the MC and the setting and how the author presented them to the reader. The writing needs a improvement though. And I did some in-line comments regarding that. But I'm sure, with practice and study of techniques, the author will be able to craft more compelling stories. Good luck!