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A marvellous take and unique for a story! Ah, the forbidden love~ I cannot wait to read more about this. I was too sad for the poor servant at the first few chapters though. Besides from that, everything is alrigth! But I think you need to keep an eye at the dialogues part. There were missing commas, slightly confusing narratives, and excessive dialogue tags.

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Forbidden Love: The Princess And Her Cursed Beast

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okay, thank you for the point outs!