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Ash_RoSe
Ash_RoSeLv12yrAsh_RoSe

I'm disappointed. The event in the 17th episode was a complete disappointment for me. (spoilers)!! It was disgusting when Mc's woman ran away crying while being force kissed. Maybe she thought he was kissing her on purpose, but running away crying was the last thing I expected. natasha promised him but still kissed someone. After following him for 4 years, it was obvious that this was going to happen. author's explanation about this, of course, a 21-year-old widow will want something. Man, you even admitted that the kiss was forced at first and then intentional. And mc left natasha without speaking for only 1 week. When they talked a week later, he said that he would never see that man again and that's how much mc forgave him. From now on there will be a cultivation arc where mc will be a wimp even when he should have beaten someone. When author-san is developing an MC's character, readers have a certain limit to MC's stupidity. And it was a huge disappointment. I'm leaving it to avoid a tantrum at any stupidity he does from now on and make a much more angry criticism. I normally give 3-3.5 points, but I will give 4.5 in order not to drop it too much. Anyone who likes the story can still read it.

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Fulfilling Life of an Urban Time Manipulator

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drunken_undrunk
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umm.... I could only say that you dropped it at the wrong chapter. I am sure you would not be able to criticize it after reading it atleast upto 40. But anyways, these are your thoughts and I respect it. Thanks for the review.

Umut_9573
Umut_9573Lv11Umut_9573

i swear every author says stuff like “read till this chapter that chapter” but the thing is, we simply cannot do so as the beginning/middle stage is where we read to make sure we would LIKE to continue reading on. we all have out own certain limitations and patience

drunken_undrunk:umm.... I could only say that you dropped it at the wrong chapter. I am sure you would not be able to criticize it after reading it atleast upto 40. But anyways, these are your thoughts and I respect it. Thanks for the review.
Melshan
MelshanLv7Melshan

thanks for letting me know and I'm already dropping.

mateo88
mateo88Lv4mateo88

thanks for the heads-up!