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Review Detail of WinterTimeCrime in Devilish Alpha Davil Duncan

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WinterTimeCrime
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This novel has a lot of potential. I really enjoyed reading it and definitely adding it to my library! Great imagery, and excellent clarification when it came to characters and their personalities and traits. This is good to do at the beginning of the novel so the reader can focus on the story and character development later on. Remember to try to separate those long paragraphs into shorter ones (I usually go for 2-4 sentences then skip a line) as most of our readers are reading this on their phones/tablets and want it to be read like a book not a newspaper. Again, an incredible job, this is going to be legendary!

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NossyRose
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true too. I love the book

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thanks very much