Harmony's story is intriguing and has the attention of many of her readers; she is able to relate to them and share their sorrow. The author does great job of introducing the character, but this introduction is unrefined and fails to speak to the audience. If this lack of expression were to be adjusted then perhaps we may see Harmony connect to many more readers. However, I wish to pass on my congratulations to the author for creating a character many can sympathise with.
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