Review Detail of Brian_Hanes_117 in Cursed Liberator

A very good story overall. Very well written. Characters seem interesting enough. The description is phenomenal. The one thing I would say, is that I think this story needs a bit more tension. Perhaps that's just my thoughts. Someone else may feel this story is just their pace. But I felt, the story could use a bit more of some umph in it to make it feel more intense. I look forward to seeing what you do next.