Review Detail of inklingparker in Dawn- An age of Darkness

Item: Dawn- An age of Darkness
Rating: 4

Review detail

inklingparkerLv12yrinklingparker

wow didn't expect that blew me away with how engaging the story was, the opening doesn't fluff around and catches straight to the catch which I thought was cool. looking forward to catching up

Dawn- An age of Darkness

Nr_Yet1208

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inklingparkerLv1inklingparker

yeah but thanks for the comments they were really valid criticisms

Nr_Yet1208:thanks for reading. I'll think about it. I think the first chapter could be made better too.

2yr

Nr_Yet1208AuthorNr_Yet1208

four stars for? was something wrong? grammar, plot holes? I mean, im open to criticism, so feel free to say what's on your mind

2yr

Nr_Yet1208AuthorNr_Yet1208

and I'll try to improve on that. hope im not imposing on you too much

2yr

inklingparkerLv1inklingparker

the character didn't have much to them I feel, but mind you I've only just started so I'll update my review as i read more

Nr_Yet1208:four stars for? was something wrong? grammar, plot holes? I mean, im open to criticism, so feel free to say what's on your mind

2yr

Nr_Yet1208AuthorNr_Yet1208

thanks for reading. I'll think about it. I think the first chapter could be made better too.

inklingparker:the character didn't have much to them I feel, but mind you I've only just started so I'll update my review as i read more

2yr